For the first one, I think the strengths were on the horse. I really liked how the horse came out, I didn’t expect it to come out as good. For the weakness I would say was the lack of details, shadows for example. Unfortunately I was not able to receive video feedback from classmates but I was able to receive some while on discussions and breakout rooms. I was told to add more greens to the trees as well as shadows. This is basically what I tried to do differently in the second one. I added more leaves to the top of the trees, I also added shadows, shadows on the trees and on the horse. I feel like the second draft definitely looks better than the first, I feel like I was successful. I really like how it came out, might even put it up on a frame and hang it up in my room.